BlockedWriter21

It is rushed, that's my full intention, because they are not in love. Right now, everything they do is rushed and without a lot of true emotion. You'll see why ...

When I said "all alone" or "and me alone" I was saying I thought I was the only woman in his life, the only one he cared for. Just a ...

I really appreciate the review from someone caught up with everything. And I can see where you find it odd that Pierce is jealous of his brother's relationship. When I ...

Thank you so much for the help. I struggle with my comma usage sometimes. I will fix these right away.

Thank you for taking the time, but honestly, if you had read the first two chapters, it would have helped a little better. Because in the first chapter it explains ...

Thanks so much. And I've only read "The Fault in Our Stars" about 10 times. But I never made that connection because he talks about how oblivion is inevitable, not ...

Okay. Then I totally understand your choice. And it does give it a melancholy tone. I still really enjoyed it. It was a great piece.

Thanks for the review! I will definitely look at these and make some changes. But as for saying the heart is a decision making organ, I was kind of playing ...

Thanks for your kind words. This is kinda the first thing I have written that isn't poetry, so it's all new to me.

Thank you so much for the review and I totally understand what you are saying about the ending, and I will definitely look into changing that. And thank you so ...

Your poem is so unique. That's one of the great things about it. The best poetry i when its unique and gives a reader a way of seeing inside its ...