Blink

Wow, thanks! This is Chapter One, and there's a lot of what you just suggested coming up, actually. =) Might post it but not entirely sure. :) I didn't like ...

The Road? Sounds good, I'll have to check it out. Your description of the murderers in No Country for Old Men reminds me of Dick and Perry from Truman Capote's ...

Well, hello again. I've come back because no one else has replied. =) The muscles bunch beneath her polka dot dress as she scrubs faster and harder. I grit my ...

Haha, thanks Hannah! With the sea in the sky bit, it was meant to be a fairly odd comparison between the blue in the sky and sea, but you know, ...

Hello there. :) Just so you know, 2-3000 words is fairly typical here, so don't worry about this length. And remember, if you change the title, do tell us! Otherwise ...

Well, thanks everyone. Moral of the story: don't try and mix random stuff and hope it works. :) But thanks for the reviews! Blinky

Haha, thanks. Those were my worries too. The girl was sort of "people", representing a kind of dystopian society, then she gets on to the swing, which represents time. I ...

Wow, thanks Demeter! Is there anything you'd like reviewed in return? If you don't tell me, I'll just storm your portfolio anyway :wink: I might lengthen it out before submitting ...

I have a guilty and very sad confession to make--I got Eoghan (Owen) from watching the X Factor. He's Irish, you see. :) Thanks for reading!

You work in Blockbusters, like, really? :D That makes it even more awesome. Thanks for the review! I thought that myself--see, I spent so long trying to write it, that ...

I'll check that one out, methinks. Winston doesn't sex up a chair. I was so looking forward to that bit. :)

1984, by George Orwell. I'm a little obsessed about this book at the moment, but it's simply incredible. Like, wow. And The Book Thief (Marcus Zusak) and The Lord of ...

Hey, thanks :) I think I just missed a word in, but I can't remember which one.

Lol, you go do that :) It's up to you where you post it, but you might want to rename this to 'original title [EDITED]' and then edit the first ...

Hey all. Sureal > Thanks man, helpful critique =P I thought about putting the action scene first, but thought against it. Now that you've said it though, I might do ...