BlazingSkies

mistery killers It's spelled "mystery." I listened even harder, it didn't sound like an earthquake either Comma splice. I could hear voices shouting from outside "Voices" themselves can't "shout." I ...

First off: You haven't figured a title out yet? They're pretty difficult, but they'd certainly improve first impressions, as it's the link you click on to get to the story, ...

As aforementioned, prologue is spelled "prologue," not prolague; though that may have just been a typo. Lavender was asleep on the ground, her head resting on Lunar's back. The werewolf ...