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Re: Puzzle
Ha, I liked it. Is it about, like, this guy you love but hes confusing you by reacting different each day? Yeah, I'm pretty sure that's it. Anyways, I liked ...
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: No Longer Cold
Hey, I liked it. Sort of dark and yet beautiful in the same way. I liked this stanza a lot: "Her face was old and worn but she was young. ...
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: Drowning in the Crowd
If I had to rate this out of 10, I'd probably give it like a 6.5 or something a bit higher. I rated it what it is because I think ...
Dec 13, 2011 -
Re: Her Mind's Winter
Hey, nice job. I liked it because it was sort of mysterious, with the way it was written. I also liked the way you wrote out what she was thinking, ...
Dec 10, 2011 -
Re: somewhere, nowhere
Hey, nice job. I thought it was good. It was sort of dream like, foggy yet vivid, and I liked that affect. I actually felt like I could have dreamt ...
Dec 10, 2011