Blackwood

AMERICA DOESN'T EXIST, NEVER HAS, AND NEVER WILL.

lol

Then why did you "review" it?

Dude you should make your review longer, that was a really long chapter plus that wasn't really a review it was just praise. Just giving you some hints!

I feel like you really dislike my story, especially with what you say in your reviews. If so then you needn't force yourself to read it.

Why?

I like this because its subtle. Its something only a musician would understand. I feel like you have nothing to do with sound in the forest, so I am confused ...

I wrote the betrayed sentence like that on purpose. And Alistair only says on sentence per scene or so, its not that much. But I like leaving you with questions ...

Mmm, the whole thing is quite secretive, I wanted Naomi and Carina to seem unrelated at first, but I'll see how it goes. Also you don't have to review anymore ...

She doesn't die. (as far as i know)Are you asking that because you want her to?

She doesn't die. (as far as i know)Are you asking that because you want her to?

I am really confused in how you managed to think Carina died. She didn't die x.x sorry very very very confused.

What??????? How on earth and why do you think Carina dies? Where did Carina die? It's like your reading a whole different story.

You ruined it for me with this comment! When you said "Jack dies" it appeared on the home page.... Dissapointed.

I re-read your new father paragraph, and I don't like it as much as the old one, but I see how you are trying to get rid of the narrative. ...