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Black_Panther

  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The White One

    Hey thanks, I love describing the jungle and other plants and animals. This was my first poem that I ever wrote, it took me about two days in my class, ...

    Dec 27, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The New Dynasty Chapter 1

    Thanks yeah my grammar and my speeling are the things that get me most. Ill fix all those mistakes that you pointed out:) I have been working on this story ...

    Dec 27, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The New Dyansty Prologue (part 1)

    Hey thanks :) About the spacing i changed that on my story on the computer after someone told me about it :) but thanks for your reply.

    Aug 8, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The New Dyansty Prologue (part 1)

    Hello Hyun, thanks i can understand about what your saying, like where the cheetahs live. What Griffenkeeper pointed out was that i put a real place mixed with a fantasy ...

    Aug 6, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The New Dyansty Prologue (part 1)

    hah yeah :) ill PM u when i post the 2nd part of my prologue, the second part is a lot longer but it has more action so to speak ...

    Jul 26, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The New Dyansty Prologue (part 1)

    hey thanks yeah i nocticed that too after i posted but i fixed it on my computer :)

    Jul 24, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The New Dyansty Prologue (part 1)

    Hey i agree with you, since that i am a first time writer and all. i will change most of the sentences that you pointed out because i liked the ...

    Jul 22, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The New Dyansty Prologue (part 1)

    Hey thanks for pointing that out I totally agree with you about the sentences, I thought hard when I first wrote them I was questioning them too... I will post ...

    Jul 22, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The White One

    Hey sorry about the small errors i was typing too fast cause i was about to leave. other than that i thoght that i did well for my first time ...

    Jul 21, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The White One

    I love your new sig. I think that it fits you :) Thanks for the comment I think that I will continue writing more poetry Ill keep you posted if ...

    Jul 21, 2009


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