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Re: Donuts? I love donuts!
Wow, this story is great: It's very funny and entertaining! Impressive!! Just the idea of donuts and cops is great! :D :D :D 2 things struck me: 1. "Jim broke ...
Apr 3, 2016 -
Re: The Red Silk
Great story! I like the way you get back to the point with repetition: "I'm not supposed to complain." I thought her personal past seemed a bit hurried. The story ...
Apr 3, 2016 -
Re: A Literary Dalliance [Part 2]
Great story, I like it a lot! It's very well-written... I didn't totally understand the very beginning . Why was it so bad she was reading? I mean, shouldn't the ...
Apr 3, 2016 -
Re: Traffic Jam
Amazingly well written! I love all of it (Story, writing, start...) . I think the very first paragraph is good how you started it with describing his frustration. I also ...
Mar 28, 2016