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A fragment of history predating this piece, and indeed telling of the time in which Arkhel himself was on Earth, which I found lying around. And the Host of Light ...

All the better for the economy! :)

It's juxtapose ! :)

Hehe, great. Some were a little 'meh' but otherwise great. :o

Well, the point of the story was to be quite earthly. I see the story was written analytically, and not very emotionally... Thanks. I may incorporate this...well whatever of it ...

So, having marshalled his full force and sending summons to the allies of the North, the Nordic King rode to the field of battle: the Ivory Plains, where in days ...

I know exactly where you are coming from, Heather! :) The poem conveyed your message clearly, at least to me ^_~

Life is full of learning :) Thanks for the comment treeclub, and welcome to YWS! :D

Ah, thanks and thanks P. Imp! It may get somewhere, I'm busy with some other projects at the moment however. My intrest in linguistics permeats, and indeed inspired this work. ...

I'll be sure to look for it, thanks Nate ^_~

Like I said, it has its faults! I understand everything you said, and those things were running through my mind as I sat there and read it. I in fact ...

Yes, yes I agree. But if one were to go to the roots of something, they could begin a grass-roots revolution. Knowing that Leninism and Stalinism did not get very ...

I won't lie when I say that his style has permeated into my writings as well!

When I say that, I say it in a general meaning. So, look at the roots of Communism; the theory. Don't look at Stalinism, or even Leninism (yes, even Lenin's ...

I suggest you then read the "Book of Lost Tales" (parts 1&2). Part two has the originally concieved Fall of Gondolin.