Bjorn

I think, Jessie, that you may have exagerated that a tad too much ^^;; As a matter of fact, I think there is a neat balance between dialogue and narrative. ...

I'll be honest now, as much as this type of poetry is accepted, as 'free verse', I am not particularily fond of it. Not saying I don't like this poem, ...

'about 4.9 in height'?! What, does this guy do exact mathematics on the side (not to mention you did not mention the unit of measurement). Loosen up. Your characters will ...

Like an angle with burning wings. I think you mean 'Angel', instead of 'angle'. :D I need to read more before I can come to any exact conclusions.

I think it's so darn loved, because when was the last time you read such a gosh darn adventure that spanned such a long distance, and visited so many distinct ...

Silverstar is my idle! Has Paolini really caught you all in his web? Unbelievable what this generation, my generation has sucumb to! The best they can literaturically(yes I made that ...

a childs book. It is not complicated to understand or decipher, its writing style is easy enough for a 4th grader to understand, the so called philosophy embedded within the ...

I vote, and ever shall, for The Lord of the Rings! Ok, I recommend it; by now a timeless classic no doubt. But I would also recommend Frankenstein by Mary-Shelley ...

It seems all the words I wished to utter were stole from my lips! But I will repeat them, this piece is quite good, and shows how with a pencil, ...

Oh I just love people who do random stuff, other people call em crazy and wierd, or rebels, I (myself being one) name em, well I don't name em.... Anyway ...

Yes it can be about one's feelings, but poetry is a metrical composition, which, it seems to me, this 'poem' lacks, it being, some kind of flow (not meaning it ...

I'll be honest. I was for a fleeting moment, nearly blind with anger. I read, but with every post my heart rate rose, and I felt I would burn to ...

Hey Wandwaver!*ahem* I knew at once Draco's mission was to kill Albus (I suspected Harry to, but quickly eliminated him, figuring the Dark Lord would've anted him). I too the ...

I'm not surprised a 16 year old can achieve this fine peice of writing :wink: Don't take that comment too seriously J Hippy... It was good indeed, quite subtle, but ...

I read the prologue only, forgive me I would read on but I have other things to address to. Well it's good indeed, it only is a prologue, but in ...