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Re: the banjoplayer (for Holly)
every so often, I return like a ghost to this website after years and years. and each time the tidal wave of nostalgia hits me the exact same way. I ...
Mar 4, 2024 -
Re: mirrors reflecting mirrors (edited)
Kitrosemon13: I did, in fact, mean perch. Also, this wasn't intended to have any sort of rhyme.Thanks for the review! I changed some small things as you suggested. Annapapadimitriou123: Thank ...
Aug 2, 2010 -
Re: the five senses of sight
omg ur lyke, so amazin. i wish i could rite liek u. :OOOOO -Holly (you asked for it.)
May 30, 2010 -
Re: Little Blue Veins
Thank you, everyone! Evi: As for the question you raised about his motives... you're right on all of them. Haha. In the beginning, he's running TO the place in his ...
May 16, 2010 -
Re: SPEW Trailer
TEAGUE: Wait, hold on, I need a coat. It's eighty degrees in here. I laughed out loud at that part! Teague needs to live on like... Jupiter. xD I hope ...
Mar 15, 2009 -
Re: Poop Poop
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Feb 19, 2009 -
Re: Ode to a Porch Swing
Oops... xD I had noticed the "then" before I submitted this poem, but I forgot to edit it. Anyway. 100xstupid: There wasn't really a particular reason I wrote about a ...
Feb 7, 2009 -
Re: The story of the unnamed full
I think you maybe should have posted the next chapters on a new topic so you could get more reviews, but oh well... The next day, I was woken up ...
Jul 9, 2008 -
Re: Lullaby
Oooh! I like this poem a lot! Sorry, this is kind of a pointless review, but I found no mistakes or anything., and I wanted say at least something. It's ...
Jun 14, 2008 -
Re: Saving Michael
Yoho yoho! Second review! Woot woot! Okay, here we are now... an old lady even patted him on the head, smoothening his unruly blonde curls and smiling at him Er... ...
May 28, 2008 -
Re: Bitter Sweet- Prologue and Chapter One
-waves at Saint Razorblade, but feels just slightly awkward about the violence with the fish- xD -waves at Amblur' enthusiastically but stops midwave to eye twitch- Anywhoo, I would like ...
May 28, 2008 -
Re: A Bow, Arrows, and a Broken Window
Okay. I edited some parts, trying very hard to keep in mind what the two of you said. I'm not sure if it's any better. PM if you have any ...
May 27, 2008 -
Re: Imperfect Fate (Birth)
I edited it, but I'm not sure if it's any better... My punctuation is probably still improper for poetry. Thanks so much to the both of you for your advice! ...
May 22, 2008 -
Re: Fast Lane
It's sounding pretty good. I'm not sure if it's the kind of story I would like to read. Seems a bit... cruel.
May 22, 2008 -
Re: To Write With The Left
Just to say--left-handed people, please please don't take offense or anything. You know, it could have happened. Actually, this sort of did; people used to think that if their children ...
May 22, 2008