Bittersweet

Hello Moo! I have returned to review some of your work once again! So, first, I'll go through and find the minor mistakes throughout the story. Don't be alarmed by ...

Hello again! :D Reading this, contrary to Lauren, I think I liked it a little less than second installment, though it's still very good. I guess I just feel as ...

Why hello there, Sela! We meet again! I suppose I liked your first chapter so much I decided to review this one too. :) So, yes, the exposition has unraveled ...

Hello there Sela! I see you've gotten quite a lot of reviews, but I hope you have room for a little more. :P I love to give my two-cents worth. ...

Hey Maki! Thanks for added this to my "Will Review" thread! I am more than happy to review! And to apologize before hand, I didn't read the comments above, so ...

Angela! :D (eh... am I allowed you say your real name on YWS? Or is it confidential? xD) First off, as the person above me mentioned, this poem definitely has ...

Weeeird... I had to do an assignment for school just like this a few days ago. Do you perchance live in New Mexico? I had to mimic George Ella Lyon. ...

So, you're smarter than 95% of Americans... but you don't capitalize your I's? That sounded really rude... *blush* Sorry. But I had to say it. Besides from that, though, this ...

*giggles* Oh, the Sims. I have all of the first edition and all of the Sims 2. Love it. :P Pretty much a Sims pro. *lame* Methinks, if you have ...

Hey there. I'm not going to go into huuuuge detail here, but I felt the need of giving you a review. Reading through this, there are a lot of significant ...

Hiya Merry! :D Eeee, I'm really excited to review this. But I apologize in advance if I make no sense. It's kind of late. I also apologize if I'm repeating ...

Hey there Audrey! :D I'm inclined to agree with Texan and Kylan, dear. This is not exactly a poem, but a list. I agree that some of the words aren't ...

Hello Winter! I have seen you around but had yet to speak to you. But here I am! Love your name, by the way! Anywhoo, I shall go ahead and ...

Gah, Adna, this is so pretty and metaphoric! I adore it! But first, onto the nitpicks. The sky is poetry All shades of blue I would suggest putting a semicolon ...

Sarah! I was trying to find something to review this morning and I remembered that I had never actually critiqued anything of yours, though I've read some. Anywhoo, here we ...