Birdman

Hey there waywardxwanderer. I don't think I've ever reviewed any of your pieces before so I am going into this reading with no sense of your style as a poet. ...

Hey there Dashia. Just Birdman dropping in with a quick review to get your chapter out of the Green Room. To start with, I don't usually review first chapters so ...

Hey Otterpop. So to just jump right into it, one of the things I can't stand to see in literary works is the use of more than three dots in ...

Hey there savannah_ohh. I just have a few things to touch on because the problems with this chapter are just the same things repeating over and over. That might be ...

Hey again Liminality. I decided to give another chapter part of your story a try because there's just so many parts hanging around the green room. Many of my broad ...

Hey there InuYosha. I haven't read any of the other parts to your story so there may be some points of confusion for me as a reader. I'm just trying ...

Hey again Rook. There was a lot going on in this chapter and that is to be expected as we're reaching the end of your project. The first thing to ...

Hey there Liminality. I hadn't planned on reviewing your chapters because I just honestly could not get through the story. Then they sat and sat and sat in the Green ...

Hey there Zenith. I don't think I've ever reviewed any of your works before so let's just dive right into this. The first thing that stands out to me in ...

Hey again Rook. I'm back with another review of your Connection story. I guess I'm in a slightly better place of understanding than I was when I looked at that ...

Hey there Rosewood. Just dropping by to give you a review and get your work out of the Green Room. I haven't had the chance to review any of the ...

Hey there Rook. I don't think I've reviewed any of your works before but it may have happened in the before times. I certainly haven't read any of the chapters ...

Hey there LadyAstella. I see that you have this listed as a finished chapter and that it looks to be the starting chapter. However the length of this leads me ...

Hey there Amabilia. The first thing that comes to my mind is the awkwardness within how this chapter is split up. I know that your prologue is rather short and ...

Greeting fortis. I am swooping in on this work from the middle of the novel so my apologies if this review is not the most marvelous . Kerra burst back ...