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  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Only Children That Die Content

    Hi Reowine :) I'm so glad that this isn't as long as some of the massive things I've read today! But you still manage to communicate a lot :) To ...

    Feb 3, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: The Heart of a Career Chapter 1

    WOOOO! HUNGER GAMES FANFIC! I'm a die-hard Panemaniac, and there are hardly any good D1 fanfics out there, everyone seems to focus on D12 or whatever. What I liked about ...

    Feb 3, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Water Ballerina

    I love metaphor :3 and this is pure metaphor heaveeeeen! :D Your use of imagery is quite literally amazeballs (see what I did there? :D) and I like how you've ...

    Feb 3, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: One O'clock in the Morning

    Hi FallenAngel97 :) Just perfect cliché heaven... I know some people don't like clichés, but I think when used well they are really quite splendid! (I have never said splendid ...

    Feb 3, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, Horror Re: Victoria

    hey ParisCarter :D Stupid Gabriel, he sounded so perfect! You have described the emotions really well in this piece, and I really started to wish I knew a Gabriel :') ...

    Feb 3, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Your presence just has that effect on me

    Just wow. I think this poem just summed up my "love" life perfectly. I love your play on clichés, with the butterflies and weak knees, because you have made them ...

    Jan 31, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Supernatural Re: Today's Fairy Tales: The Shadowman

    This has to be one of the best short stories I've ever read! It has a certain flowing quality that's hard to find among many of the short stories that ...

    Jan 31, 2013


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