BigDaddyDawg1899

I am a horror fan, and this is not horror. It was decent and a little suspensful, but you need to clean it up some and make some improvements to ...

Im not much into poetry but I gave this a shot. I really liked this line. There the road to Jerusalem, stumbling down to be forgiven of sin,The Knights Templar ...

Okay so I liked the idea of this tory, but it needs to be re read and some editing. I seen a couple of placed you doubled words, and you ...

Hello there. First off, I was to say good job on the descriptive writing. I think you did a very good job. One thing I did find a bit annoying ...

Hey Lily...I just read chapter 1 and I really like it! First off, let me get the nit picks out of the way. Im just gonna tell you your puctual ...

Hello again. Just thought I would check over this for you since you asked. Here it goes... O how I love this boy

Hello there. I wanted to give ya a review on your story. I usually don't read romance but gave this one a shot. Here it goes. "Ry," I started to ...

Your story was good. I am always a sucker for the monster in the closet. I am not going to go though and tell you your punctual errors and spelling ...

I feel this was very well put together up until the end. I didnt like how the first person telling the story didnt even make it through a whole chapter ...

Like the name, Like the story, as short as it was. I don't really know how your supposed to rate a story that is that short. But I thought I ...

I actually liked the writing aspect of it, but didnt like the end. It could also have been a little longer, but I like really disturbing stuff like that so ...

I agree, this was a good piece of writing. It really wasnt the story that was unique, but the wat that you wrote it. I would love to read more ...

Hello there, and thanks for the post. I have to agree totally with jellybean on this. What is this aircraft? Where are they from? Anything to be a little more ...

I was pleased in reading this. Ad I first started, I was growing confused, but towards the middle I really put it together. I think you have a good plot ...

First off I must admit I never really got interested in the war genre. But I gave this one a shot. I was impressed with this. The story was good, ...