BigBadBear

Areida, I'm afraid of what your writing is like when it's not rustic! This was simply incredible! I loved every word in this story; I loved the pain that I ...

Conrad, This has been posted on the site for a little less than a month, and it has yet to get a critique? Man, I'm sorry. That blows. I hate ...

I concur. It is probably one of the most intense, frightening, deep and scariest novels I've ever read. It's a whole new way to read a book. I recommend it ...

Hey, Kylan! After the intensity of last chapter, I'm glad that this one was slightly slower. I like the fact that we got to be introduced to Phoebe. I like ...

Hey, Kylan! I'm sorry for neglecting to read all these. But I'm here now, so let's see how much I can get done. This was, quite frankly, some of the ...

Dumas was better than friends, anyway. Oh totally. Okay, so, this was really disgusting. But in a great way. I love the fact that you can take a bloody tub ...

Okay. So I'm really happy. I've finished my math, and I've read this, which is becoming sort of an amazing story. So I love your characters. They seem so much ...

Holly, I like your poems. They are simple, yet they hide an underlying message that I think you want the world to hear. Tiptoeing over lives, I sing idyllic melodies. ...

Luckily, His brother had bought him first-class tickets, Fix that. The pilot could not hide his shock in his announcement. No, I don't like this sentence very much. It sounds ...

Suzanne, I found this much more enjoyable than the last chapter. I like the fact that we got to get into Manfried's mind a little bit more, and also Aline. ...

Suzanne, I liked this. I'm not crazy about it, but I'm liking it so far. I hope it will be something more than a cutter story. Angsty stories tend to ...

OK. I'm sorry that I haven't been reading these, but now I'm here, and hopefully I can get through a few in the limited time I have. Chewing on the ...

Holly, You have a very strong poem here, but the main problem with this is that the change from Stanza 2 to Stanza 3 is much too abrupt. You go ...

Hey, Kylan! Haha, I like how it's Connie, Angel and me again, the same people who read Elephant Boy. What's up with that? Okay. I liked this chapter, but at ...

Caleb-- Hi, there! So, at the beginning, I knew that this was going to be really good. You certainly have a great jumpstart for this story. In fact, I really ...