BigBadBear

Kim, this was really good. I knew that it would be. There are only two things I noticed: "Her eyes are sky blue I share those to." To should be ...

Hey! Kim this is great. I thought that the Narrator was God, which He probably is. Anyway, Kim I loved this more than anything else you have written, besides your ...

Kim! Wow! That was amazing. There was only one line that bugged me: I excepted you and never asked you to change. I didn't really understand this. Other than that ...

Whoa..cool! Kim I have got to say that you have EXTRODINARY talent. Yeah, I know, I didn't spell that right, but who cares. Wow...that's all I can say. I didn't ...

Hey! This is really cool, considering that I have never heard of/read/played? Final Fantasy..if that is what this is. There are a few spelling errors, and some info dumps, but ...

Ok, I haven't even read it yet, but I can tell that you need to do something. Between each paragraph, you need to double space. It makes it so much ...

Oh. cool! That was a really cool poem, Caroline. I liked it alot. There were a ton of things such as spelling and grammar that you need to change such ...

Hey sorry about that. I had to stop cuz my keyboard went crazy. Sorry Anyway, there were only two things I noticed. Simply typos. A ripple of laughter came from ...

Oh my gosh! You hit the jackpot! Another brilliant story. The only thing I could say was: You are sounding too much like Maximum Ride. Try not to copy the ...

Holy Crapola! That was the best chapter I have read in my life! Wow, you really amaze me, Cat. This is wonderful. I noticed no errors at all. Congrats! I ...

Ok. Here I am! Jake As this being the heading of the second part, underline it or put it in quotes or italizs it. pale blue pj bottoms. pj = ...

Oh my gosh! This is way way funny! Good job! Lol, Niff and Naph. that's confusing. I love your names. They are VERY creative and original. I loved it. I ...

Hey! This is good. The only thing I had a question on is that I couldn't really tell who was talking, but I figured it out in the end. I ...

Oh cool! That's...strange lol. Cool. I liked the description of the teacher. Anywa there were only one thing I noticed wrong. 1. what say you all about a five minute ...

She had expected to react differently when she had been told such a story, but she was acting the complete opposite of what she expected to act. She wasn't scared ...