BigBadBear

Hey, Sumi! Since I'm gonna be working with this for a while, I decided to tell you exactly how I felt about it. *This might be long* A lot of ...

:) Dude, you've got to stop being so good at writing... I mean... you're going to be the next Dan Patterson or something! Annnyway, this was a great chapter. I've ...

Hey Suz! I went and printed this out, edited it and wrote some comments. It was fantastic! The Holocaust started with one man and ended with ten million dead. Jews, ...

I'm back! Actually, I had a father because everyone has a father, only I didn’t know him. My mother said he left when I was really little because the doctors ...

Hey, Suz! I can't believe I haven't read this yet. Someone was talking about it in the chat or something and I've always wanted to take a look at it, ...

Hey. :) Ok, before I start, you need to edit this and rate it R because it has the 'f' word and if it has the 'f' word, it needs ...

Oh goodness! I did not expect that ending - took me totally by surprise. Like Aliam, I was like, "Oh gosh! He's licking her!" But it was just her dog. ...

Crap! I wasn't the first to get here... :( Yeah right. I'm not on crack. It's just you're a freaking great author. :) This was really good. A little short, ...

Ok, I'm back due to your PM's. ;) There are a lot of grammar mistakes. It hurts to look at them. I would go back with a red pen and ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS. Now, before I read this I ask that you please put a space between each paragraph like I'm doing. You'll get a lot more critiques that ...

Huh... Well, I guess it was an okay poem. You've done better. I've read some of your others... let's see... how should I put this? The poem didn't have a ...

Tag, This was an amazing poem. It really was. I loved the whole metaphore, the whole meaning... the whole shika-bob. Haha. Dude. You are going to be a famous poet ...

haha. Why has no one critted this? XD It’s like fading into a larger picture Wherein you lose all delicate features And wonder where the light has gone. [And] You ...

*dies* Seriously, Jabber. How come everything you write is so... addictive? Haha. This story was fantastic. I liked it a lot. It was really funny, and liked the whole puffin ...

Hey, Jess. I usually don't read R stuff, but I thought that since you've been talking about it, I'd take a peek. It was good. It seems like a scene ...