BigBadBear

Aliam Remard, Oh, my goodness. This was really amazing! I can’t believe that I would ever come across a fantasy that I can really get into. I really dislike fantasies, ...

Hello, and welcome to YWS! Okay, you want to know why no one has critiqued this yet? Because it's way too long. Please shorten this to just one chapter. No ...

Razor, Another really, well done chapter, but still, I’m not getting that feel that I got for WoaS. This chapter, I thought, was totally disconnected to the last chapter, save ...

Sa-am! I'm hurt! You didn't tell me that you posted another one! Seriously, dude. I'm like your #1 fan! . They talked of gods and heaven and the good days ...

Haha, nice Kylan! Very funny! I'll go through each of them to tell you what I like. Idealogical Rheumatism It seems to me that we'll all be in wheelchairs someday. ...

Sam, Zomgoodness! I love your writing more than anyone else’s on the site! It’s so much fun to read an always has something extraordinary in it. Always. No matter what ...

Razor, Razor, is there any way that I could not like this? Well… um… for the first time, I think the answer is ‘yes’. I’m very sad to say that ...

MidnightGladius, This segment was terribly exciting! I loved every second of it! It had my eyes glued to the screen the entire time, which is very hard to do, considering ...

MidnightGladius, This is the reason that I don’t like high fantasies. In the first section, with the two men talking about only God knows what, you overload us with so ...

Jen, This was very, very good. I enjoyed every second of it thoroughly! It was very well crafted, and the ending was very emotional, giving us the good stuff. I ...

Jen, This is an interesting story. Not my favorite, but I think I know why it’s not quite up to par with the rest of your writing. I don’t want ...

Medusa, First of all, it was a very good story… for the most part. Second of all… what? First: I liked the first half of the story a lot more ...

Zomgoodness! An original Sam production! (don't ask) I can't wait to read this! Ahh! I'm so excited! *calms down* DA CRITIQUE: genshibakudan What the fluff does that mean? she could ...

There's really nothing to critique here. It's perfect, grammar wise. I really can't find any fault in this, other than telling you the usual stuff. You know. 'I want more! ...

Jabber! Long time no post! You need to be more active! XD I missed you. Mrs. Burnett laughed again. “Obviously. Writer’s block, I take it?” For some odd reason I've ...