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Hi, Pretty Crazy, I'll be your reviewer for today. ^^ She’s half fire dragon and half mystic dragon, giving her an unusual hot pink color. Be careful here...you're starting to ...

Hi Silversun, here's my review on the next part. He wouldn’t be allowed in, but I needed him by my side. It feels like an "although" is missing from the ...

Here's more of this (horribly late) review, as much as I can get through before I have to sleep. Again, I'm sorry for being so late, and you have my ...

That was...beautiful. Horrible, yes, but beautiful at the same time. I wish I had something more constructive to say, but honestly, I loved the piece. I was riveted, which almost ...

Hi, Tigerwolf, I'll be your reviewer for today. First of all, I'd have to say that Karsten and Master_Yoda both gave you very excellent advice, and you should definitely listen ...

Hi, Silversun, here's the follow-up review you requested. ^^ Apollo asked, his golden eyes simmering in the sun. This is a very odd image; I think of "simmer" as a ...

Hi, Silversun, I'll be your reviewer for today. Above my head, the Goddess Artemis cast down her pearly light which in turn made my shadow dance lithely atop the water. ...

Hi, Wang Chung, I'll be your reviewer for today. First of all, I've got to second the previous reviewers who've stated that your description is much too dense. Worse, it's ...

Hi, Doctor, here's me with the review. Since I'm very pressed on time I might not finish it in one go but rest assured I will get it done. ^^ ...

I've finally gotten around to reviewing this. XD Sorry I'm so late! Anyway, I now think I know what you feel like when you're reviewing my stuff because honestly, I ...

Hi, Doctor, here's the review (at last!). ^^ He could almost taste the air, thick with the festival’s smells; cooking meat and the spicy seasoning his region was known for, ...

Hi ofir, here's your review as requested. Sorry it's a bit late, school has started for me so I've gotten rather busy. , there was tension in her face, and ...

Hi Rosey, here I am on the final part. I felt my lungs suddenly expand, as if a laugh had died. ? I don't quite understand this imagery. I didn’t ...

Hi Rosey, here's my review on the second part. ^^ This had been such a fun summer Meh, not liking this phrase. It feels very tell-y and too basic to ...

Hi, ofir, I'm back. ^^ If my last review hasn't completely scared you away... I'll try to be less nitpicky because I think you're already aware of the basic issues ...