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This is sweet :) And just adorable and cute. Love it. Great job, -Brie

It does help :) Thanks! And it's 100 on the dot actually...I'll look into it :) Thanks for the reviews -Brie

Thanks :) -Brie

It is about my parents... :/

...Uhm...thanks. Wow. Reading that review...just punctured my confidence a little...and maybe my heart. Haha..I feel as if i was just stabbed... O_o Thanks for the tips though...I'll uh..look into it.

I love it :) Aboslutely awesome! How many parts will there be? Brilliant work, -Brie

Thanks alot mellophone7! :) Your comment means much, -Brie

Thanks...i wrote this last night. When I'm upset, or have something on my mind, I write a poem. So, basically, they are all real life experiences in my life.

Thanks :) And your first observation about the "A movement besides her had her," it is supposed to be a her. I'm in the middle of rewording that. I know ...

That's okay! You have good skills and great potential... :) If you ever have a question, people are very helpful. Just send someone a personal message and no doubt they'll ...

Thanks! Puts up with a lot, poor Nate... Nice poem :) -Brie

Absolutely Brilliant. Beautiful. Very emotional. Captured each feeling. I felt as if I were the guy. Great job, -Brie

Thanks for the review :) I will make changes to this piece according to your review. Of course in my favor, though. Soldier was just a metaphor also. I'm not ...

Your explanations were perfectly clear :) Again, as I said before, you've really helped me see what I stumbled over in my piece. And ah! I always get crazy with ...

Thanks for you review! I'm glad you found it funny and well written. :) I'll try to stick some description in there. I realized, too, that it there was more ...