BethsLlama

Hello! Review here! The beginning was very strong. It had a good hook and it really drew me in. I felt that it started to get really rushed in the ...

More structure! It helps with getting your audience to clearly understand your story, characters and theme. Ask yourself questions. What life lesson do these characters learn from their hardships? Who

It needs more structure so that you can expand on your topic more fluidly. Paragraphs help the audience read the writing more conveniently. It'll also help with getting all of ...