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Re: Dear Lorraine
Wow. Creepy. D: I'm really not the best at reviews, but I'll leave one anyway. I can honestly say that I did not see that ending coming at all. I ...
Dec 17, 2012 -
Re: Confused and Knocking
Wow. That was intense, man. I've got to say that I remained hooked throughout the entire thing. It was a great read! While there's not much for me to add, ...
Dec 7, 2012 -
Re: Therefore I am Dead, Hypothetically.
Wow. I really don't know what to say. This was incredibly gripping and interesting. I'm new to the site and haven't really spent much time reading yet, so I haven't ...
Dec 6, 2012 -
Re: Poor Atlas
This is really interesting. I liked the way the story was told, but I thought there was a lot of repetition in the beginning. The dialog between the girl and ...
Dec 4, 2012 -
Re: Its All In the Meeting.
I really enjoyed this story. It was a little unbelievable, (i.e. everyone in the Coffee Bean applauding, etc.) but that really seemed to add to the corky, light hearted feeling. ...
Dec 4, 2012 -
Re: The Cool Bean
That was brilliant. Not much room for criticism here, but I will say this; Because of you I cry every time I eat beans. I think this would make a ...
Dec 4, 2012 -
Re: Sunset Wishes
I'm not much of a reviewer, but I just wanted to chime in a bit. I thought the rhyme scheme was very nice, and overall the whole poem had a ...
Dec 1, 2012