BenjaminMichael

Wow. Creepy. D: I'm really not the best at reviews, but I'll leave one anyway. I can honestly say that I did not see that ending coming at all. I ...

Wow. That was intense, man. I've got to say that I remained hooked throughout the entire thing. It was a great read! While there's not much for me to add, ...

Wow. I really don't know what to say. This was incredibly gripping and interesting. I'm new to the site and haven't really spent much time reading yet, so I haven't ...

This is really interesting. I liked the way the story was told, but I thought there was a lot of repetition in the beginning. The dialog between the girl and ...

I really enjoyed this story. It was a little unbelievable, (i.e. everyone in the Coffee Bean applauding, etc.) but that really seemed to add to the corky, light hearted feeling. ...

That was brilliant. Not much room for criticism here, but I will say this; Because of you I cry every time I eat beans. I think this would make a ...

I'm not much of a reviewer, but I just wanted to chime in a bit. I thought the rhyme scheme was very nice, and overall the whole poem had a ...