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Thankyou TenYo! :) I appreciate your positive feedback! :D Ben.

Okay... Don't worry about it... but why - if they don't get the hints - would it go to the extent of bad writing? It might just be a wacky, ...

Lovely. Short & Sweet review. Ben :)

Thankyou Moriah! If I'm honest I couldn't agree with you more. I need to thoroughly revise, re-work and then revise this poem again. It lacks structure, rhythm, imagery and a ...

I enjoyed the poetry about the Critique, but I think you need to perfect the Writer stanzas. Also, like the others I'd suggest posting in black and white, use colours ...

Thankyou for your thoughts and suggestions. However, after suggesting to me to make this into a 'novel' do you really mean 'cut it down'? Or did you mean spread out ...

Thankyou for the review Elinor, I appreciate your points and no, don't worry, you weren't harsh atall. However, I'm afraid there is a slight chance you've mis-interpretted the kind of ...

:smt024 Hey, fixed here! I'll just be picky, I guess. but struggle to realise the benefits of Fish. "realise" is spelled "realize" :) This merely depends whether your nationality is ...

Thankyou Mo, Yes, very helpful feedback and I'm editing this book of mine constantly to try and make it easier to follow, but still hold it's ranting-style perspective. Thanks! Ben.

Thanks for the positive feedback and welcome to YWS! :P

Thankyou for your review Juni! :)

The reason for the capitalized names of foods is just a style to treat them as if they were names of people. It's similar to the style Jack Dee uses ...

Haha thankyou Juni! I'll take in all your reviews if I ever decide to have a crack at poetry again! :P Little secret to this poem: It was more of ...

Thanks for all the reviews!

Thanks for the review Kat :)