BenFranks

Excellent spot on the plural use of "hands", thank you very much. I didn't notice that. Interesting point about the smell! I guess it didn't really overthrow me when I ...

I will have a look for you.

Always happy to review any work you put up.

I don't mind you prying. Interestingly, no, it is not a romantic poem at all (but I quite admire the idea that it could be - it's been very interesting ...

Don't be sorry, it is sad but as I say, I remember the colourful times with the person and that is beautiful - not sad. :) Thanks for your thoughts.

Thank you for the review. Interesting that you described the voice as a "husband" - it is in fact supposed to be my own; although I do like your take ...

Many thanks for the kind words!

Thank you Indie!

Many thanks, will edit now.

Many thanks, I have made some changes.

Many thanks.

Have you thought about this as a Performance Poetry piece? That form is taking off big time here in the UK.

Thank you for your thoughts. If you have some suggestions for the couplet, I'd love to hear them. -B

To the best of my knowledge, all the above work is original. I have not lifted from any other works. Thank you for the positive feedback!

Hm, that's hard. There are a lot of movies I really love, but at this point, for me, I'll have to say it's Captain America: The First Avenger . Sure, ...