BellaRoma

Hey! Thanks, as ever :) All I can say is that I think I want to go over this again, and it may be four parts now, to cover everything. ...

PS. Thanks for reviewing again :)

What are your theories (I really want to know)? I love seeing where readers think this is going... Perhaps enspoiler them in a reply to this?

Tension... I hope you guys enjoy! Just letting you know you should probably read the new draft of the first part if you haven't already. Let me know what you ...

Thanks for the review. I love getting advice from everyone. I think I'm almost done finishing part 3! It should be up soon (hopefully)

Thanks, as always, for reviewing :) The gashes were semi-healed because he had them for about a week between giving them the gashes and killing them. Next part should be ...

PS. I agree about the protective instinct thing. She cares strongly about her "babies", and in this story she has a major soft spot for Grace (you'll see why...)

Thanks! I could imagine Garcia reading this aloud too. There will be another part to this, from Grace's perspective and picking up where this left off.

Thank you!

I could really use your feedback on my story. I feel like I got the pacing a bit wrong.

I've read this, but don't think I'm qualified to review it... I don't think it's as cliché as you're making it out to be, though. I will say that. Good ...

Hey, guys! Decided to post this in the end. Let me know if you think the ratings need to be changed... PS. Would appreciate some feedback on the voice of ...

Oh, are you only really gonna focus on Reid, or will this come round to other characters eventually? Is it going to be like multiple 3rd person POVs (can you ...

No worries. Keep me posted!

Also, just a suggestion... number the chapters, so people know the order in which they should be read.