BelarusBirdy

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This is fantastic! Keep writing poetry, you're really good! I love it so much, and I can really relate to it.

I think it's a very original idea, and I liked the ending.

I hope you write another, it was so original!!! I love it!!!

Thanks! I just want to say this again. I don't know if door finish is flammable. DO NOT try this at home OR to escape the asylum you're locked up ...

thanks :) I don't usually write poetry that short. At first, I started typing a longer poem, but I deleted a lot of that. I wanted to test my skills, ...

I don't know how realistic this is D: I don't know if that finish stuff they use on doors is really flammable, but it's what ended up written. feel free ...

This is so great!!! I like the line "a girl in the heart of a hurricane." Very creative and artistic!!

Thanks! changed the colon to a semicolon. as for the repeated 'again,' I used the word three times to show that they want to take all the creativity away, take ...

That is so amazing!!! I love it!!!

more amazing work from my favorite TFF!!!! This is a sad beginning filled with hope, if that makes sense. That's what I saw, at the very least. I hope you'll ...

This is kind of like a story I'm writing. Mine is kind of failing, so I'm probably going to abandon it to work on another story. But your story is ...

I like the story. It's not the type of story I typically read, but I like it.

I disagree. Another character would add length to this story, and you said you wanted it shorter. I don't think it needs to be shorter, though. I think it's fine ...

Thanks! If you like this, you might want to read 'Black Box' by Julie Schumacher. It's about a girl whose little sister was diagnosed with depression, but it's better than ...