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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I Don't Wanna Wear My Pants Anymore!

    Ha! Finally a bit of poetry that's humorous. This made me smile and for once I'm not all depressed when reading a poem. Thanks.

    May 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: And I'm Proud

    I love it. It says what others are afraid to say. True perfection, my dear. Fantastic job in standing up for yourself. Bravo. ~BTM

    Mar 25, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: "Things I Don't Like" by Death

    Hi Paul! I really liked this ^_^ I love your portrayal of death, and I'm happy to see more of that grim humor. I also really liked the opening, with ...

    Mar 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Beneath the Smile

    Hello again! I see the improvements you've made, much better!

    Mar 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Baby Poem

    This is sweet. And I like the use of "I wrote a baby poem", because it's very childlike, which gives an even more innocent tone to the piece. Well done!

    Mar 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Profanity

    I like this. It's amusing and clear cut. Good job!

    Mar 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Inspiration...

    I quite liked this ^_^ It summs up writer's block quite nicely. And it's also very inspirational ;D And I love that while looking for inspiration, you wrote a poem ...

    Feb 28, 2011


Nothing of me is original. I am the combined effort of everybody I've ever known.
— Chuck Palahniuk