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Re: Forget Your Earth -- Chapter 1
Steven Universe is my favorite show, and I'm picky about fanfictions for it, so sorry if this comes off as harsh! So, this was probably written before Earthlings/Back to the ...
Nov 18, 2016 -
Re: Quiet to Explosive
Nice poem! I don't tend to like nature poems, but this one was good. I really like that you used "its" rather than "it's" in the last line. Proper grammar ...
Nov 18, 2016 -
Re: Fighting With Tenacity
Hey, this was cool! I don't entirely understand it, but if it were in context/part of a larger work, I'd love it. The piece almost seems dystopian to me. I ...
Nov 18, 2016 -
Re: Lucas' Loss
I wasn't seeking a story with gay characters. I don't usually read LGBT fiction. I don't hate it, I'm not a homophobe, but it just isn't my genre. However, this ...
Nov 18, 2016