BeKWithaK

Cool as! Where is the rest of this masterpiece; I want to read more! :D I once tried to write a scene like this...needless to say it did not work ...

Wow. You need to put SPACES into your sentences and look at your punctuation and spelling. I think you even spelled "fuck" wrong at one point, which seems to be ...

This is the first poem I've ever read that I actually liked. I don't read poetry, no offence intended, because a) I stutter a lot when I read so I ...

Hi! I'm Bek. I love this bit of writing, but is it going to be a a story or a short story or just a chapter, or what? "The man ...

Alrighty, I'm sorry but I couldn't finish reading it for two reasons: 1. Put this in parts! I only read half of it, it's too long, for me anyway. 2. ...

Hi Wheadee (did I spell that correctly?) Twilight is alright, but it's just a fad. Don't copy it, please don't. No offence but I'm sick of Twilight and its many, ...

Hey there, I'm Bek. :D Just before I review, I have a question: is this one of those Twilight-based stories about vampires biting or werewolves or something? Okay, now that's ...

It's good writing, I like it. And also in reply to what Lena said I thought the 'semi colon rule' was it could be used where either a comma or ...

Mmmm *thinking face* I like it. But it goes from first person to like, third person. At the start (most of) the statements are made in first person, then when ...