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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Seven --

    What Hannah says, I love your writing, Jokeless. There's this book called Monster Blood Tattoo, it's a trilogy. The writer is Australian, I think, and his name is D.M. Cornish. ...

    Apr 11, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: ...Six...

    LOVE IT! Get this published! But make sure you get it published in Australia as well. :D I love the twins! I apologise for calling them similiar to Tweedle Dum ...

    Apr 11, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Five -- Twins

    I agree earthfire. Why do you bother posting when your work is perfect anyway? Also your grammar has and spelling has improved greatly as compared to the rest of your ...

    Apr 11, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: I am planning to send this to two of my most loved! Review!

    Hi! This was really sweet and because it was short, it was sweeter. :) And I agree with the above writers. They have given my life a meaning; they are ...

    Apr 11, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Ball Of Light

    Hi I'm Bek. I've been away for a couple of weeks...it's good to be back on YWS :) Okay, first of all, I agree with StoryWeaver about most of it, ...

    Apr 11, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Four -- The Morning

    Hi. Bek again. It's proabably unhealthy to be on the computer at midnight (which is the time where I am) but I'm definitely not completing my english essay right now ...

    Mar 24, 2010
  • Other » General, General Re: Best Friends Never BReak Up

    Hi! I'm Bek :) I agree with Julide--it's cool and poetic and stuff but there should be...more. It would be a great prologue; I'd buy it if it was the ...

    Mar 24, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Three -- Merriot

    Hi! Again, it's me, Bek. I think I've reviewed all your work about Merriot so far :D I love it but now it sounds like Alice in Wonderland, but not ...

    Mar 24, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Missing Sarah

    Hey! I'm Bek. Or Beck, or Bekka, or Bekah, or Beckk...yes, I'm a variety of different people :D I haven't read any of your other pieces, but I like this ...

    Mar 24, 2010
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: The Story (PG-13 for sensitive subject)

    Wow. I'm finding myself saying that a lot on this site. I'm glad this is on here. I love the honesty. And I agree with you, even though I'm not ...

    Mar 21, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Two -- The Spider

    Hi. I'm Bek, I reviewed your other first chapter--which I really liked. And I also agree with you--grammar is your enemy. There are so many mistakes, it was in truth ...

    Mar 20, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The true can set you free

    Hi! I'm Bek, or Rebekah, or Bec, or Becca, or Becka. :D If you say that aloud it sounds funny. :D Okie dokie, now reviewing business: First paragraph: There is ...

    Mar 18, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: One -- The Juggler (2nd draft)

    Aaaargh! Why does everyone taunt me with cliff-hangers? :D First of all I'm Bek :) and I love emoticons. And I'm still practicing at this reviewing stuff, so I'm sorry ...

    Mar 17, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: One for the Money (Short Story)

    I liked your story but there's a few small grammatical errors that I can't be bothered to type. Just copy and paste it into Word or something so you can ...

    Mar 16, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Odd Love Chapter 1

    Hi I'm Bek, and in my opinion you started it beautifully. :D Wow that was like too long for me to remember what happpend! But I did finish reading it, ...

    Mar 16, 2010


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