Baywolf

Hello Crimsona! Didn't you just have this posted under another title? Haha, anyway, I thought this poem was really good. I'd meant to review it earlier, but I got hungry, ...

Hello Laloifi! Welcome to YWS! So...I have this feeling that you're upset about something. (Yeah, I'm astute like that.) I'm happy to see that you managed to put some of ...

Hey Skins! I thought this was funny. You've managed to capture the voices of delinquents very aptly. Almost too well in fact. :) Anyway, yes, there were a few phrases ...

Hello ED! As I read, I found myself inexplicably drawn to your side of the argument. A feat I'm sure was exactly as you desired. However, I also found a ...

Hello jennyr! This is very interesting. I haven't read anything like this before. The idea of a man kidnapping a boy is really creepy...it's strange. But this is also a ...

Hello RainStormZ! Happy Review Day! Impression: I loved this! The story started out really slow, but once I got into it and the fantasy elements I was hooked! It is ...

Hello stargazer! First off, I would like to say, Happy Review Day! Impression: While I read, I was impressed with your use of dialogue. You did a good job of ...

Hey CandyVenom! This was great! It's like Gulliver's Travels and Thumbelina meets V for Vendetta. You certainly have an interesting concept here and you did a great job showing the ...

Hello EloquentDragon! I'm so sorry to see that you were a smidge frustrated with the lack of reviews, so I have come to rescue you! It's the least I could ...

Hey Hawk! This poem reminded me of "Goblin Market" by Christina Rossetti, and if you haven't read that poem, I highly recommend it. :) Yours was a bit more accessible ...

Hello camdapirate! I must say, I was not expecting the ending. That little picture girl is freaky. I'm not a fan of scary stories, but despite the rather bland and ...

Hey emmylou! Here to review the wonderful chapter two of your delightful story Zadar! I could see some definite plot devolopment, and I liked the flashback that Aralyn has at ...

Hey emmylou! I read this earlier and then I had to go vote, but I'm back to review! :) Impressions: I liked this. While I read, I got really excited ...

Hey Bubble! I'm here to give you my thoughts, as I promised. :) Okay, so I thought you did a great job of keeping up with the Buffy parody part. ...

Howdy! I have to say, for not having read the previous chapters, I found this immensely entertaining! I was swept up in the pirate lingo and atmosphere of danger--yet also ...