Baywolf

Hello Emmer! February is my birth month, so I was drawn to the title. That and it was really foggy outside this morning. :) So I felt like this poem ...

Hello Amanda! Welcome to YWS! This is very interesting. I love, love, love science fiction and the concept of DNA recombinants. This story kind of reminds me of Maximum Ride ...

Hello GrenadeCatcher! This was very action-packed for such a small excerpt. That's impressive. You asked us to tear this apart, so...here I go. Don't worry, I'm very nice. :D I've ...

Hey Hawk! Haha! Love it! I don't have any nitpicks right now, but after I get back from class I can go over it again. (Not that I hope to ...

Hey Hex! After stumbling blindly into your story, I found my way out. I felt much like how Alice must have felt upon entering Wonderland. The whirling chemicals and sliding ...

Hey Jashy niece! Thank you for requesting that I read this! I loved it! At first, I was afraid I was going to read about a rape, but I'm so ...

Funny you should ask, but I found it oddly assuring. Today is my birthday you see, and I am now halfway to middle age. I was beginning to wonder if ...

Hey Katie! Thanks for the heads-up! Despite what you might think about the "boringness" of the chapter, I really liked it! It gets tiring sometimes to me when every chapter ...

Hawk! Speaking of not letting family members know when new things are posted. *looks pointedly at Hawk* Ahem. On to the review, or shall I say, lack of review. I ...

Hello decoy! This was actually very neat! Whenever I start exploring my characters, I always inevitably end up writing about them, but this way seems so much easier and a ...

Oh, HP, how you do make me laugh. (And wonder at your sanity.) This poem was long, I admit, but I thought it was cute and funny. Wow, I'm really ...

Hello, Masquerade! This was a fairly simple poem, but all the same, I liked it. The theme (traveling joy) is easily relate-able. It's an awesome feeling of freedom that you ...

Hello Suz! Here to review, although I have to say, I really didn't find anything alarming. Except for the fact that it was totally awesome! Sure, you have a potty ...

Darling Tanya, As usual, your prose delights my reading taste buds. This isn't the first time I've read this chapter, but I enjoyed it all the same. I can't believe ...

Hey Celtic! :) Sorry it's taken me so long to review this, but for some reason or other I kept getting distracted right when I was about to begin. Anyway, ...