Baywolf

Hey Stranger! (never thought I'd see myself write that, but guess it was bound to happen eventually) So, a vampire story. I like vampire stories, and as they go, this ...

Oh. My. Goodness. I just had a moment of "Wow". That was so beautiful. Look...I don't say this very often, because I don't cry, and I don't like to let ...

Goodness, those two have a harmful relationship if I've ever seen one. Competition between the sisters...hmmm. Makes things interesting for sure. But I still can't help but feel as if ...

Hey ShayM! This is a really interesting concept! I like it. Yeah, the "toke" thing kinda caught my eye. You might want to fix that. Haha. Anyway, there were a ...

I have to admit, I don't usually find myself able to understand most poetry, although I love to read it. So, really, I can say that it was pleasant to ...

Hey! (First comment, wooo!) Interesting, and disturbing, all wrapped up in a neat little package. I've read books where someone was recovering from an eating disorder i.e. Sara Dessen's Just ...

Hmmm. I like the new ending. :) Very compelling. He hinted at having known her--always a good indicator of something magical--and I anticipate some other new developments in the story. ...

OOoooo! The plot thickens! I have to admit, I was a little giddy when she admitted she loved Robin Hood to her mother. However, I have this tendency to slightly ...

Hey! Other than a few grammatical errors, this is a very nice intro into a story! I liked it, really. I don't know if you plan on expanding upon this ...

Hey! Well, I want you to know I really enjoyed the use of imagery in this story. I like when an author uses their creative license to paint a picture ...

First off: I always love a good Robin Hood story. And this is definitely different since it is from the perspective of someone (a girl) from his band of merry ...

WOW. While the story was only a few paragraphs long, with minor dialogue, it has an impact. No one likes to entertain the idea of causing another's death, and guilt ...

This is beautiful. It's simple, yet covers a large scope with imagery. Definitely different from anything else I've read in a while. I never would have compared a person to ...

Hey! Well, I just want to let you know up front, that I like the MC Whisper (great name, by the way). She's very strong, and sure of herself, which ...

Well, for starters, you were correct to assume your grammar wasn't exactly up to par :) but I have to say, you were also right in that it is an ...