Baywolf

Hello dear, I would have used your actual username, but it's rather long. Luxe, is it? Anyhow, I thought this was a nice sketch of the origin of a character. ...

I'm back! And I do remember reading and reviewing this story! (I also remember liking it!) Anyway, it's kinda late for me to do a proper long review, but I ...

Snoink, With that, we left for a restaurant. Best. Line. Ever. That's all I have to say. I haven't caught back up yet, so of course this whole chapter has ...

Hello rememberme! This is a nice little poem. It's simple, but the imagery conveyed is enough to carry the message across. The odd composition adds another element to the reading ...

Hello Matthews! Nice to meetcha! You've practically summed up my existence in this poem. Nicely done. I've been drinking coffee since I was a wee tot. My grandmother used to ...

Hello Jagged! This is a beautiful use of imagery. I love the last two lines about the doe's legs scrambling across the white pebbles. Often people concentrate mostly on the ...

Hello! Happy Review Day! Okay, now that the pleasantries are over, we can settle down to the reviewing portion of this...review. Haha! Actually, I don't really have too much to ...

Hello! This is such a cute story! I loved it! I found a few grammatical errors, mostly where you repeated a word. Actually, in both instances you repeated his twice. ...

Hello charcoalspacewolfman! I like your username. Very...long and random. That kind of combination is always a plus in my book. Anyway, I see that this is for a contest type ...

Hello medieval! I came as soon as I read the summons. Anyway, I see that this chapter has already been critiqued quite well, so I won't hit any of your ...

Hello mellaniimarii! You asked for reviews, so here I am. I'm Baywolf. Nice to meet you! :) Since this is basically an "outline" or sketch of a story, I can't ...

Hello, purplepen! Delighted to meet you! I'm Baywolf! I have to say, not being a poetry person myself, that I rather liked your poem. It is short and to the ...

RH! Yes, it's me. Your dearly absent aunt. I'm back for a short time today, and I happened to see this and had to comment. As always, your characters are ...

This spot is reserved for my review. I will come back when I have plenty of time to delve into the story. Plus, I might want to go back and ...

Hello my friend of the Kafka variety! I have to agree with earendil's assessment . She did a great job of pointing out the obvious pros and cons, and I ...