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I'm going to edit!! It should all make sense then! And Cleo is Egyptian ... she looks a lot like an Ancient Egyptian because she is, so it's very obvious ...

Sorry for the late response Yeah, I know it's quite predictable. I'm still working on the ending, though, so hopefully there's a twist!!

Mmmm ... didn't quite notice that ... thanks!! And I'm glad you're liking this!!

Thank you!!! ^^ And I will ;)

I'm loving it!! Straight away you captured my attention, and I couldn't look away! So well done. Though it seems a little ... I can't quite put my finger on ...

Thank you!! I'm glad you liked it. And I know ... yes, sometimes the shattered box can't fix itself. I understand what you're saying, and I have been getting some ...

Thank you, it did help!!

Yeah!!!

Thanks!! I'm glad you like it too!! And yeah, will do XD

It's awesome!! So worth my time!! I can't wait to read the next chapter!!! You have captured my attention, and there are little to no mistakes apart from the ones ...

Thanks heaps!! And I see what you mean with the exclamation marks, and I would have added more in, but I didn't want to cram in too many. Thanks for ...

Thank you so much!! And yeah, use it if you need ;) Hope it helps as much as it has me!!

You're welcome! I'm glad I helped!! Grammar is difficult to work with. And maybe it's just me, and your ending is fine. I don't know (PS I didn't know you ...

Wow! Amazing!!

That was deep!! I love it! You're very skilled, and you show it well!! But can I ask ... was this a dream??