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Ah, thank you. You're right about that sentence. This was an older writing and I had to go through it and make it more palatable as far as over-wording goes. ...

Awesome words here my friend. A very cool rhythm structure here as well. I like the title and- Brook of iniquity where love flows. Awesome last line.

This was pretty fun to read. I like the fact that it's not broken up into any stanzas. It's like one frenetic train of thought, and in my head I ...

Well that's actually pretty cool. I didn't know the mormon faith held anything like that in it. Also interesting that I just started reading The Varieties of Scientific Experience by ...

Ha, ha. Well put, sir.

Hey, that was pretty good. First thing I've read of yours and I am impressed. I think the teacher should get a kick out of this. It certainly held my ...

This is very kick ass. I wish I'd written it, because then I would lord it over you all, and spit in your upturned faces. Ok, maybe a bit too ...

Hey, thanks for the review. I'm afraid it's not the case that I purposefully seek out intellectual audiences. For some reason this is just the most natural way for my ...

The Rewriter. I hope you don't mind if I just take a crack at the meaning of this line for you. It means rewriter of history, of events of any ...

I hate your face. But no this is solid enough. It could easily be the lyrics to a metal song. Also no hard feelings about your face.

Fair enough ending. Fair enough indeed. I didn't actually get into it until I read the ending, but that's because I'm picky and not much for mundane every day stories. ...

Hey, I just rewrote the persistence of re-memory. It went up in the last edit. Something about the way I wrote the last one wouldn't stop bugging me. I wasn't ...

Hi elijah. Thanks for your input. The character Nathan Flynn was already introduced. He suffers from perpetual deja vu and has been robbed of his free will. I hope that ...

Thanks for the review! Ok, I agree with every change up until: It had Schrodinger’s black fuzzy face on the front, even at the camera he looked all knowing and ...

Sorry if my small review is pointless Never. I thank you for taking the time to read and review. Eventually most or all of these stories and people will tie ...