BarrettBenedict

"I'll wither with you here" is a beautiful phrase. I enjoy the wounded heart expressing itself through scientific concepts in general, which seems to be a theme in both of ...

To clear it up: at the end, the virus dismembered language. Which is a metaphor for whatever you wish it to be.

Noted.

Hey, thanks. I'll be taking your advice on the commas and the the capitalization into account, because as you pointed out, only capitalizing The Virus was intentional. Thanks for the ...

Haha, ok, despite my highly refined cultural sensibilities this one gave me a healthy chuckle. If I were to make a parody of something like this it would just end ...

Hey folks, I rewrote this one in the last edit. Director's cut ending and I changed Timothy's name because the new name is infinitely cooler.

Hey thanks for your review. As for who Timothy is and why she's talking to him, he's her pastor and she's calling him because she's lost her faith in God. ...

Hey, I was laying in bed last night thinking about what you said about the main character being a woman. I think that's a spot on observation, and I've decided ...

Hey thank you both for your comments. I wrote this for an exercise for my creative writing class. The class has been forcing me to write like a sane person, ...

My goal here is to create a stepping stone for your own imagination, nothing more.

Hey, I really like your style. You have a very solid voice, one that seems to be made for entertainment. I couldn't help but notice you are a science geek, ...

First off, thanks for your review, Olli. Second off: oy vey! You're actually asking me to reduce the quality of my work by dumbing it down? I might suggest TV ...

Why thank you. It's interesting that you mention my vocabulary, as there is at least one completely made up word in here. See if you can spot it.

Hey thanks for the good advice. You're totally right, I've neglected the momentum of the beginning a bit. I was wondering how I might make it more whiz-bang. I'll have ...

Hey, well thanks for the spelling advice. It's too bad this wasn't your cup of tea. At least you got your review.