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Thanks TigerShaard, There's more :D , it's just not as organized as this. It's forming quite slowly, but I'm working on it. :smt001 -Bandgeek

Thanks for the comments. I'm combing through myself and wow... there's a lot of errors.

Thanks, Rain isn't in the story so thanks for catching that.

Thanks everyone! I know have a edited version of this. So please comment on that not this. Thanks Bandgeek

Thanks you two! I now have a new version so please comment on that, not this anymore. Thanks!

That was great in a scary way. How did the body switch happen? I didn't see any errors or mistakes. Your main character was really creepy, almost to creepy. Was ...

Thanks for the advice!

Wow. That was very interesting, in a great way. It all flowed together so nicely.

This is so funny its sad and so sad its funny. Perfect characters aren't meant to be.

Is it The JCTG or JCTG? Because in part one you use JCTG and part two you used The JCTG.

One thing you spelled litter-box wrong, otherwise its good.

You use victory two times. that's fine but would sound better with two different words.