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Re: That Feeling
Amazing!!! I love this. I envy you 'cause I am terrible at writing poetry. I may try to post one some time, just for fun. :)
May 15, 2018 -
Re: Cade (ch 1)
Thanks a lot LadyAstella!
May 15, 2018 -
Re: Singing Chicken
Just a short review: This is good! It's a lighthearted and funny poem. The fourth line is a little iffy. Did the chicken make the ping? I really like your ...
May 14, 2018 -
Re: Atlas ch1
Thank you!
May 14, 2018 -
Re: Atlas ch1
Thank you for the constructive criticism! I don't always catch these mistakes.
May 14, 2018 -
Re: Atlas ch1
Thank you! This was extremely helpful!
May 14, 2018 -
Re: 13 Blackberries (Part 1)
Okay, first off, your grammar is fantastic! I think that really drew me in. Your story was very well written and very easy to follow. I'm excited to see what ...
May 14, 2018 -
Re: The Fly
I really like this! I love how you showed the character try to cope with something that was annoying them. I think at some points, you could break up your ...
May 14, 2018