Banana25

Thanks a bunch for the review and tips. I will definitely be using your tips to improve my writing! Thanks again -Banana25

I hope that's a good wow! thanks for commenting!

Thanks you so much for the review! I will take all of these things into account to improve my writing! Thanks again -Banana25

This is really good! I like finding out where they meet Aria and I'm excited to see how she becomes one of the band. Keep up the great writing!

Thanks for the review! I haven't decided if I want to add on yet or just keep it a short story. If I continue, I was thinking it may, as ...

Thanks you so much for the review! Very helpful! I may decide to add on and I will certainly take your advice on dialogue and interactions between Liam and Erika. ...

This is an awesome second half! I can't wait to read more!

I love this so much! I was hooked from the first paragraph! Nice work!

This is really good! I'm eager to see what comes next!

This is really beautiful!

Wow! This is so amazing! I love it so much!!!

Thanks for the suggestions Ellinor!

Thanks for the tips! I am not sure why that's on there.

Thank you Cadi! This is very helpful! I might expand on it but for now, it's just a short story.

Good heavens, you have talent! You really need to get some of this published. Or start a book of your poems!