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BagelMarie

BagelMarie

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Wolf eyes, chapter 2

    Hello again! I'm back to continue reading and reviewing your story! :3 I have to start by saying I just love your powers of description! Especially with the spells - ...

    May 17, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Wolf eyes, chapter 1

    Hello there! I really enjoyed this read, I'm already heartbroken for Zita and excited to learn about her and her journey! I love your use of detail - I could ...

    Apr 27, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Bard's Ballad Part 1

    Hello, friend! After you told me you were writing a fantasy novel, I knew I had to read it - and I'm glad I did! What a fun way to ...

    Apr 18, 2018
  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: The Tall Man

    Hello friend! Ooo, this was super scary O_O You are a master of descriptors and imagery! I could clearly picture both Vivian and the Tall Man, and while I don't ...

    Apr 17, 2018
  • Short Story » Humor, Narrative Re: The derps

    Hello, friend! To be honest, I wasn't sure I was going to like this story - I'm not a big fan of the post-apocalyptic theme, but then it went in ...

    Apr 17, 2018


The day, which was one of the first of spring, cheered even me by the loveliness of its sunshine and the balminess of the air. I felt emotions of gentleness and pleasure, that had long appeared dead, revive within me. Half surprised by the novelty of these sensations, I allowed myself to be borne away by them, and forgetting my solitude and deformity, dared to be happy.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein