BadNarrator

hey Ary. because a lot has already been said about the content of this piece I'm going to limit most of my comments to the form. as it stands right ...

hello and thanks for following me. first thing I want to mention, "Am I stupid? I ask myself. But that’s a stupid question, so it must be true!" this part ...

hello, I wanted to review an item from your portfolio as a sign of gratitude for following me. now I'm not sure exactly how to approach this piece. it's prose ...

hey, so I wanted to return the favor of following me by reviewing something of yours. I think you did a pretty good job of building tension in certain scenes ...

hello there, I'm going on this crusade to review an item from the portfolio's of each of my followers and you're next on the list. so for this story. I ...

hey there. first of all thanks for following me. I'm trying to review something by each of my followers and I don't think I've reviewed anything of yours yet. if ...

well alright then. first thing you should know is that I'm not much of a poetry guy. I love reading poetry, but when it comes to writing it or offering ...

well hi there, so this is my next stop on this little pilgrimage of mine. let me start by saying that you have a knack for poetic detail. the bit ...

hey, this poem reminded me of a poem by Dean Young in his book title Skid . unfortunately I can't remember the title of the poem and I don't have ...

let me ask you, are you or have you ever been a Korn fan? because I think you've done a really good job of capturing the creepy atmosphere of JD's ...

hey there, Dragon99 you're going to be the first of my followers whose work I review as I embark on my online mission of redemption. before I begin you should ...

hi there, so I really enjoyed the narrative voice in this piece. it came across as well-tempered yet full of conviction. you make good use of detail with the movements ...

hey there, CC I genuinely enjoyed this story. looking at this piece in the context of your past short stories it is obvious that you have grown tremendously as a ...

hey there. I read this story a few days ago, but didn't get a chance to reply until now. one of the things you'll hear people say in writing workshops ...

'sup. so it seems like you have the seedling of a good story here. you just need to find some rich soil, sun and water for it to grow. what's ...