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scribblingquill: Ha, ha. :D Yes, honesty would probably be my crutch. Well, originally it wasn't backwards, but I hoped forcing the reader to puzzle it out would make the poem ...

Hello, I think the content is very good. But I wouldn't have thought it to be a human. That suspense, really held me. But being a human is what you ...

M. - I absolutely agree; "the" should be "this." Anticlimax? ...yeah. I suppose I let the poem end itself. After all, I wrote it in Algebra class. Who knew math ...

M.: Thank you for your honest review! I see what you mean about the third and fourth stanzas clashing- it is a complete change in direction. In fact, now that ...

Ahhh. I should have known you would outsmart me.

Hello. While looking over this thread, I had an idea I thought I'd share. It seems the more I read of your poetry, the more I realize they aren't poems ...