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Re: Inevitable Outcome Part 01: Flight (Edited)
I like the story in general, also you used great dialogue and detail. Reading this aroused the curiosity in my mind and I had to finish it. The action in ...
Jan 23, 2015 -
Re: My first encounter .. Pt.1
Your correct the speaker is a little boy and thank you I'll add more imagery and detail next time.
Jan 23, 2015