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Hello there, This is very interesting, and I think this style has a lot of potential, with certain words stranded on the right margin. However, I think it would be ...

Hi there. I think this poem has some potential but does need some work here and there. First off, you establish that the poem is in first person, and that ...

Powerful stuff. The imagery used is some of the best I've seen, really creates a definitive sense of realism and actually being there. There's not really anything I can nitpick ...

Solid writing - I enjoyed it. Moving, compelling, well-written. Solid imagery and atmosphere. I especially like the use of dashes for the most part. I find a lot of writers ...

Nicely done. There's flow, rhythm, solid word choice - the whole works. This may be a bit of a nitpick, but I think the line "I could blindly run backwards" ...

A generally enjoyable piece. The descriptions of their times spent together are smile-worthy and heartwarming. However, I would have really liked to have actually been in one of those scenes ...