Azila

No, I get the joke. :wink: ~A~

I don't think this was posted in the right place... I'll get a Mod to move it. :wink: ~Azila~

1. I intended to write about Gryphon being a traveler, a gypsie of sorts. But somehow it never came into the story. Maybe I should change that... 2. Aira's wings ...

Thanks so much, Camille! I don't know if I already said this, but I actually entered this piece into the Mark Twain Young Author's Workshop (see siggy) so encouragement is ...

Mm, I see your point there Canis. I'll think about it--maybe I'll make something else... I'll have to gnaw on that. Thanks! ~Azila~

Wow, Squallz! Thank you so much! That was an awesome review. :D ~Azila~

Thanks everyone! Canis: I guess there isn't much accent in a name, I'll fix that. Also-- I kind of wanted it to be overdone... Naraida's a kind of theatrical character. ...

Thanks for the [future] review. :D *gasp* you don't know what a Jabberwok is? It is the villain (sort of) from a poem called Jabberwocky, by Lewis Caroll. Here it ...

Ahh... I see. I will definitely think about it--thank you! ~Azila~

Thanks! Um... what do you mean by 'the places where I say the teacher's in Olivia's story'? I'm not quite sure I understood that. Do you mean like here: She ...

Wow! This has been on here for less than an hour and already two very helpful critiques! I love YWS. Gosh, fantasyartist, I can't imagine I made tense mistakes--I'll have ...

Thanks everyone! I actually won Jenna's contest (much to my surprise). Here's her beautiful watercolor of it. Thanks! ~Azila~

Thanks everyone! When (if :roll: ) I edit this, I'll definitely take your ideas into account! !Azila~

But! I've decided to make this really, really short Chapter longer by adding a part from the Alpha wolfs point of view. It will be the wolf watching Ayra's transformation ...

Thanks so much, Camille! Your reviews are amazingly helpful. I will definitely integrate your comments into the piece. ~Azila~