Azila

Thanks guys! Yeah, that opening sentence is a little rough. I'm not sure how I'm gonna rewrite it quite yet, but I will. Oh, and canislupis: I changed the part ...

Thanks everyone! nickelodeon: I know what you mean; I'll try to work with that. canislupis: I don't quite get what you mean about it being to rhythmical. PM me. And ...

Hi Thanks for reading it, guys! I'm so surprised that I got replies already! Squallz: Thanks for the criticism, I will keep it in mind as I re-read. Snoink: Thank ...

Thanks everyone! Lady Pirate: I actually have started another Zaphyros story, but encountered some writers block along the way :( so gave it up for a bit. I look forward ...

Thanks, skool15 and Pirate Lady! I actually have written another piece about Professor Z, but I'm going to wait like another day to post it. :lol: Anyway, thanks again guys! ...