Azila

Hullo! Just a few little things to point out before I get to the real meat of the review. All had been killed and summarily stuffed, and then wedged into ...

Hullo. I definitely think this is worth continuing! But more about that later -- first I want to correct some grammatical glitches and typos and stuff. My comments and the ...

Hullo! First off I'm going to point out some little technicalities and such. TheWalkinDude has already done a pretty thorough job of this, but there are some additional things I ...

Bog How wonderfully ominous! At first, I thought it was just someone stuck in mud, but as the piece progresses, I see that this bog is much, much more than ...

Hullo! First I'll say a few little nit-picky things, then I'll get to more general points. He’d wanted to fly for as long as he could remember. I would love ...

Hullo there! This is a great idea. The introduction of characters was very well done, Pete as a character felt very real, and the backstory was masterfully hinted-at (the "hands--er ...

It hit me in the face -between the eyes I might add. Nice opening line! I think there should be a comma after "eyes," though. I could feel its stinging ...

*Ehem* Remember, you're supposed to tell me when you post something new? ;) Anyway... _________________ Snowflakes fall to the forest floor, settling gently onto beds of moss. All is silent. ...

Hi there! I'm going to start with the grammar/spelling nitpicks, then go on to the overall stuff. Ring. Ring. Ring. Ring. "Hi you've reached my voice mail and I am ...

Hi! Sorry if I repeat anything other reveiwers have said... London, as we once know it, has been abandoned by her once reliable neighbours. Shouldn't that be "knew?" “General, I ...

Hmm... I like the idea of this poem. It's simple, elegant, and thought-provoking in an almost nostalgic way. But in some places the rhythm kind of bothered me. Because it's ...

Hi, Sam! I just thought I'd get you back for your critique on my story. ^^ _________________________________ Maybe someday, she’d wake up, buried heaps of new capitalism, her values and ...

Hi! I apologize in advance if I'm mean -- I'm not being sadistic. I actually do want to help you. :D “Tag, you’re it,” said Jamie as he tapped me ...

Hi there, Canis! You haven't written (or posted, anyway) anything recently, so when I heard about this, I got so excited that I started to bounce in my chair! :) ...

Hi! High above he sails the sky, I don't really understand this line... do you mean to say "IN the sky?" I'm not quite sure... :? An opalescent globe, wrapped ...