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  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: The Rabbit

    Hello there magiccharm! This is definitely a nice little positive poem. And it rhymes yayy! Rhyme is always good for a positive poem. It makes it even better. Anyway, I've ...

    Nov 21, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Trapped

    Hello there, ElvenJedi! First of all, I noticed something about the rhyme in the first stanza. You have a rhyme in the beginning, and for the rest of the poem ...

    Nov 21, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: the boy

    Hello clancy! Hope you're having a good day! First of all, I love your style. It's written in such a unique and interesting way and I like how you used ...

    Nov 21, 2018


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